You put the majic in all you do lunatik. I think your a grand writer!!
moonspice1 11 months ago

Обалденная песня)))

Молодец))

Мне музыка очень понравилась, особенно в припеве...как ты так придумала? У меня бы мозг не повернулся)))
alisa0502 1 year ago

@alisa0502 спасибо!
lunatik2706 1 year ago

you´re a musician. Dont give up. you´ve got so much talent
incongruente1 1 year ago

this song is pretty awful
sinsybinsy 1 year ago

ok.. finally a bad comment. whould you bother telling me, what exactly?
lunatik2706 1 year ago

aside from the cringingly bad vocal delivery, the lyrics are a matter of personal taste, I find them somewhat lost and pointless, but thats artistic license.

The chorus part where you sing how are you and switch keys just sounds horrible. overall, melodically, it needs a lot of work, and i mean a LOT. in other words, write another song!

but dude, the only way to get better is to keep writing i guess! Just dont write one like that again! lol
sinsybinsy 1 year ago

lets see.. the lyrics seem pointless to you because you dont understand, what i mean?

what'r wrong with a different key? taste thing?

i am actually a gal, but i dont mind really..

thanks for the critique! i do apreciate it.
lunatik2706 1 year ago

btw, my guitar was a bit out of tune I hear.
lunatik2706 1 year ago

Very beautifull song indeed. Your signing on English is great as well. Much props. I'm suscribing ! Let me know when CD is going to be out, i would love to own.
SectorSos 1 year ago

thank you! I will announce that on my site and on my youtube channel!
lunatik2706 1 year ago

@SectorSos in case, you're still interested, the CD is out

Are you in Afghanistan now?
lunatik2706 11 months ago

потрясающая песня) кстати выложена прям в мой день рождения.
Daniell686 2 years ago

I can't help, but somewhere i heard a similar intro ...
0dirkschneider0 2 years ago

It's sad that I missed your on-line concert. Got any planned in the near future? Keep up the good work!!!
doubleilisi 2 years ago

yes, there will be. I will announce them. Thank you!
lunatik2706 2 years ago

can you send me the chords ? plz
MinkiaBoyz 2 years ago

Хорошая песня, на русском бы её услышать:)

♫
Naumegus 2 years ago

А так можно вообще?))) ♫♫♫
Naumegus 2 years ago

афигеть, я нашёл своего клона только в женском теле)))) мы с тобой похожи как две капли воды)
alexeypenzin 2 years ago

:)))))
lunatik2706 2 years ago

Brilliant!
Grubenpony12 2 years ago

моя любимая песня=)
Jasee1313 2 years ago

это приятно )
lunatik2706 2 years ago

Very worth listening :-)
silviante1988 2 years ago

WOW! Sehr gut Spiele.
mglgestapo 2 years ago

напомнило Брат2:

— А как переводится «How are you»?

— «Как дела, как поживаешь».

— И что, всем интересно, как у меня дела?

— Нет.

— А чего тогда спрашивают?

— Просто так. Здесь вообще всё просто так. Кроме денег.
Jasee1313 2 years ago

такой лиричиский гранж, бой красивый, нирвану напоминает=)
Jasee1313 2 years ago

wait - you composed all this music yourself? that's awesome!!! you should publish this.

also, if you wish, check out my channel and i have a few videos there of music. thank you.
icomposer3 3 years ago

yes, i have. thank you.

i will check out your channel!
lunatik2706 3 years ago

Thanks to YOU!!
anleij 3 years ago

is your song??
[b]anleij[/b] 3 years ago

yes it is.
lunatik2706 3 years ago

lunatik you have something of beautiful to communicating.. continues this.

sorry for my english

I hope you understand.

bye
anleij 3 years ago

Thanx so much!
lunatik2706 3 years ago

gorgeous the guitar is superb!!!!
Barbarabeatles 3 years ago

Очень хорошо. Глубина песни есть, нужна правильная обработка с басом, ударными и тп.

Однажды ты видимо станешь известной певицей :-)
Fabjan2007 3 years ago

красиво=) А ты не думала сменить гитару? аккустика или электрика зучали бы поживее, мне кажется
originalreal 3 years ago

Думала думала! Деньги бы еще...
lunatik2706 3 years ago

Ого. Вау! Слов не хватит, выразится!

Бомба!
JONJI777 3 years ago

Просто суперски! перевоплощение (reincarnation)Курта Кобейна!
berdn002 3 years ago 3

Reminds me of STP an Nirvana for sure, sounds really nice... But, grundge is... well... it depends what is the goal of this person...
pavlinoff 3 years ago

nice really enjoied it!))))
eddieclichelv 3 years ago 2

i came to see if you succeeded in posting a new vid. so i watched this again. i really loved the guitar here.
usseryroad 3 years ago

thx!

unfortunatelly, youtube is insistanly denying to accept my new cover..
lunatik2706 3 years ago

наконец-то собственная песня. Но мне кажется тебе нужно попробывать себя в более медленных и лирических песнях. Хотя ил учшим твоим исплнением считаю битлов. Желаю удачи в написании и исполнении собственных песен.В общем, как поется в песне: а девочка созрела)))
IronDinamo 3 years ago 4

:))))))))))))))
lunatik2706 3 years ago

I agree with zaykaman about this song. I understand that this is first time when you posted your own song and this could be some stressed for you but I think because of that I don't feel as much power as in previous yours videos.

Lyrics and music really cool. Thats why I hope you will post more your songs.
rafgaw 3 years ago

I like your original song, very nice guitar plucking and strumming. Check out my covers and videos as well. Awesome videos by the way.
gr8li1975 3 years ago

Very nice. Your original song's as good as your covers. Nice haircut, by the way
lexxx20 3 years ago

wow. loved ur song. loved ur style. loved the guitar. gave me a goose bumps at some point. i needed to take my head from the way things are right now. friend's story, aren't they all?
usseryroad 3 years ago

Thank you, Yael. glad the song touches.. Wasn't sure if to post it.
lunatik2706 3 years ago

needed to sing more confidently)))

is it fresh video, or from archive?
zaykaman 3 years ago

Agreed.

It is the freshest ever
lunatik2706 3 years ago